Wednesday 16 April 2014

Show Don't Tell



Reflection
I was learning how to write about my feelings without saying it directly.  One thing that worked well for me was using the planning sheet and remembering what had happened.  One thing I could do better next time is use more interesting words.  Overall I think this piece of work was challenging.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

You've done a great job of 'showing' your emotions rather than saying "I felt..." I think this makes your writing have more impact as I can form a picture clearly in my mind when I read it. Well done.